Alternate version
A feminine beauty
Kindly curvaceous,
while arrow-straight
with integrity
From the transom
of her soul,light reflects
Created: Sept. 15, 2003 Last updated: October 07, 2003
© 2003 Eric Porcher - All rights reserved.
I prepared the image and text above last month. I put the page online here last night. Tonight on my way home from work, it was still on my mind; and journal-scratching became this tentative alternate. I hope you can find a similar grin to what I must wear going through this.
Add to bottom of She, something along the lines of,
"What is more beautiful than woman?"
By the time I got off the highway here, and was able to write, half the words were gone.
Something about a matter of opinion, and one's perspective, on what is most-beautiful. I won't apologize for seeing it this way, but won't profess to see it your way.
How can you tell I preferred geometry to algebra in junior high school?
Little off-topic here ok?
In the brightness of the day the sun is often too bright for my eyes, and for the photograph I'm looking for; I suffer and strain under it. Even so, it provides a view of some objects in such delightful abundance, clarity and speed. (But I long for the low-and-coloured light of sunset)
And there are no pretty creeks, without a rain shower.
And!
:) Out here tonight, there are no lone women
without mean-honkin' dogs!
Not that I'm out here looking for lone women, without dogs. Just an observation.
But, that's a sad thing — that a woman feels the need for a big dog, or a
gun or a stick.
Not that there's anything wrong with dogs.
It leads me to a thought of sadness and embarrassment at being a male. Men have done things that cause me shame, when standing in the face of, woman.
(Not
that I am without personal shame)
A woman should be able to feel safe
out and about by herself,
here, tonight.
Right?
Not that I'm necessarily safe here either.
But it doesn't seem or feel equal, and I don't like that.
Maybe women just need to be as naive as me.
Hmmm; that's all I wrote.
And it's midnight, and I'm fading.
What could be more beautiful, than woman?
Last updated October 07, 2003