Alternate version

 


A feminine beauty

 

 

Kindly curvaceous, 

while arrow-straight 
with integrity


From the transom
of her soul,

light reflects

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tangent

Swine Hall

Created: Sept. 15, 2003   Last updated: October 07, 2003

© 2003 Eric Porcher - All rights reserved.

 

 

 

 

I prepared the image and text above last month.  I put the page online here last night.  Tonight on my way home from work, it was still on my mind; and journal-scratching became this tentative alternate. I hope you can find a similar grin to what I must wear going through this.

 

 

 

Add to bottom of She, something along the lines of, 

 

 

"What is more beautiful than woman?"

 

 

 

By the time I got off the highway here, and was able to write, half the words were gone.

 

Something about a matter of opinion, and one's perspective, on what is most-beautiful.  I won't apologize for seeing it this way, but won't profess to see it your way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How can you tell I preferred geometry to algebra in junior high school?

 

 

Little off-topic here ok?

 

 

In the brightness of the day the sun is often too bright for my eyes, and for the photograph I'm looking for;  I suffer and strain under it.  Even so, it provides a view of some objects in such delightful abundance, clarity and speed.  (But I long for the low-and-coloured light of sunset)

 

And there are no pretty creeks, without a rain shower.

 


And!     :)      Out here tonight, there are no lone women without mean-honkin' dogs!

 

Not that I'm out here looking for lone women, without dogs.  Just an observation.

 


But, that's a sad thing — that a woman feels the need for a big dog, or a gun or a stick.
Not that there's anything wrong with dogs.

 

It leads me to a thought of sadness and embarrassment at being a male.  Men have done things that cause me shame, when standing in the face of, woman.

(Not that I am without personal shame)

 


A woman should be able to feel safe
out and about by herself, 
here, tonight.

 

 

Right?

 

Not that I'm necessarily safe here either.  

 

But it doesn't seem or feel equal, and I don't like that.

 

 

Maybe women just need to be as naive as me.

 

 

 

 

 

Hmmm;  that's all I wrote.

And it's midnight, and I'm fading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What could be more beautiful, than woman?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Last updated October 07, 2003